Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Copy Edit #5

From blog Project 52:

This short story is riddled with improper punctuation.

Original:
I gazed at the lush green mountainside through the little window, beautiful.
“I’m sorry.” He said.


Corrected:
I gazed at the lush green mountainside through the little window: beautiful.
“I’m sorry,” he said.

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